chyrus and noah ANZAC assembly

ANZAC Assembly Recount

WALT: Develop meaningful ideas by adding detail.

Topic: School Holidays. Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience. Purpose: To tell people about your holiday experiences.

Text type: Recount

Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings: With a hushed silence... The last post began to play… We will remember… Slowly we filed out of the hall…

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Plan: Title: P1: Introduction: Who? When? Where? Why? P2: What happened? Why/How? P3: What happened next? Why/How? P4: Conclusion: What happened in the end? How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?

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On Friday at assembly we had a ANZAC day on because it remind us of the day that the army that fight for our country.The army that fight for our country, that day there was a lot of people that died and little of people that lived. The people who died there is a little poppy that grow on the field that the battle that first war that was 100 years ago.

Anzac is on Saturday, April 25 but on monday it is a Public Holiday because John Parr British Army soldier Private John Henry Parr 19 July 1897 22 21 August 1914  was a British soldier. He is believed to be the first soldier of the Commonwealth killed by enemy action in the First World.