Monday, 19 May 2014

our raft

One day Sam and Toby were making a raft
out of ropes ,logs and sticks.They worked hard to
make the raft . They  knew that  the raft would break if it wasn’t done right. They had to test it out so they would
know that it would not break and go down into the water.
Now that it was tested out they put on their lifejackets
 so they would be safe. After that they had fun
on the raft. They had fun for a long time. then it was time to go home.
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1 comment:

  1. Hi Noah it is me Angelica. I like your story because it is interesting story and I like your raft. I like the names Sam and Toby too.