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Monday 22 June 2015

chyrus and noah ANZAC assembly

ANZAC Assembly Recount
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WALT: Develop meaningful ideas by adding detail.
Topic: School Holidays.
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about your holiday experiences.
Text type: Recount
Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:

With a hushed silence...
The last post began to play…
We will remember…
Slowly we filed out of the hall…
Helpful Links: Vocab List
Plan:

Title:

P1: Introduction: Who? When? Where? Why?



P2: What happened? Why/How?



P3: What happened next? Why/How?



P4: Conclusion: What happened in the end?
How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?


Once you have finished make sure to mark with a buddy or yourself using our Paragraph Rubric. Draw an image that represents your writing in sumo paint or ABC paint.

Start Writing Here:

On Friday at assembly we had a ANZAC day on because it remind us of the day that the army that fight for our country.The army that fight for our country, that day there was a lot of people that died and little of people that lived. The people who died there is a little poppy that grow on the field that the battle that first war that was 100 years ago.


Anzac is on Saturday, April 25 but on monday it is a Public Holiday because John Parr British Army soldier Private John Henry Parr 19 July 1897 22 21 August 1914  was a British soldier. He is believed to be the first soldier of the Commonwealth killed by enemy action in the First World.

Chyrus and Noah ANZAC assembly recount term2 2015

Start Writing Here:

On Friday at assembly we had a ANZAC day on because it remind us of the day that the army that fight for our country.The army that fight for our country, that day there was a lot of people that died and little of people that lived. The people who died there is a little poppy that grow on the field that the battle that first war that was 100 years ago.


Anzac is on Saturday, April 25 but on monday it is a Public Holiday because John Parr British Army soldier Private John Henry Parr 19 July 1897 22 21 August 1914  was a British soldier. He is believed to be the first soldier of the Commonwealth killed by enemy action in the First World.

Friday 12 June 2015

Comparing Christchurch to Auckland


Walt: find comparisons and differences between items and provide proof 

This week we had to compare Christchurch to Auckland. We created a presentation to show our ideas. When then created a Padlet with information from the story that proved our ideas. I learnt that Christchurch has colourful buildings because to help make the locals happy and grateful for surviving the earthquake. They also started painting the side of buildings because the art gallery was demolished during the 2010 earthquake. This way, the locals still get to see art from local artists.

This last week I learnt about comparing Christchurch to Auckland. When the earthquake happened in Christchurch lots of people survived the earthquake and lots of people did not survive. The people that survived were very sad so what they did was they painted some the buildings to make Christchurch a more happy home.   

Wednesday 3 June 2015

Noah reviewing a game


Name of Game: Pixel Quest
How do you score/ win:You have to make it to the other end of the door but you have to get the key first.
Difficulty:6 /10
Fun:10 /10

Image result for pixel questPixel Quest is a side scrolling game and you can duck,  jump, Jump on walls and even speed .In the game there is lava, spikes and blades.If you dye you go back to the start of the level there are over 50 level in Pixel Quest.When you play you collect diamonds and you collect the keys to open the door at the end.Sometimes there will be two doors so you will have to get two keys to open the doors.Sometimes to will see blades so you will have to watch out.